Wednesday, 19 January 2011

Street Photograph VI in Twenty-One Syllables



Among frowns, hoods, umbrellas
I look for a sign of love
as rain almost connects us.
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  1. Sandy Tozer1 February 2011 at 09:29

    Dear Sian, I keep reading this.
    Isn't it interesting how the word 'almost' - often acting as a weakening or diminishing agent - here, in your piece, becomes a keenly felt reaching out and creates a close magical space? Lovely.
    Sandy

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  2. Sian Thomas11 February 2011 at 10:57

    Thanks, Sandy.

    S x

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